I will tell you why people leave your landing page without doing anything.

Send the URL. Within a few hours you get back three specific reasons a first-time visitor bounces, and your headline, subhead and first screen rewritten and ready to paste. Not a checklist. Your actual words, replaced with better ones.

Flat price, one page
$15

Same day. No call, no scheduling, no subscription, no upsell afterwards.

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What you get, exactly

  1. The five-second read. What I believed your product was after five seconds on the page, in one sentence. If that sentence is wrong, nothing else on the page matters.
  2. Three named leaks, each quoting the words on your page that cause it, and what it costs you in visitors.
  3. The rewrite. Headline, subhead, first paragraph, and the button label — finished copy, in plain text, paste it straight in.
  4. The one thing to cut. Usually a whole section. This is the part people argue with and then do anyway.

The kind of thing it says

leak twoYour first screen says what the tool is (“a compatibility layer for professional history”) and never says what changes for me on Tuesday. The sentence buried in paragraph four — “you always know where you met someone” — is the headline. It is concrete, it is a moment I recognise, and right now it is 600 pixels below the fold.
the thing to cutThe waitlist. You told me in the same breath that the product is live. A waitlist on a live product reads as “not ready” and it is the single most expensive word on the page.

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